My goal for my paper is that it is clear, concise, and contains all the necessary information. My main priority for revising my essay is adding quotes. The quotes are needed in order to add evidence and make the thesis of my essay stronger. I have mostly used paraphrase and summary so far, and need to include more quotes. The second most important would be organization. I got multiple feedback comments about the order of paragraphs, such as where the quote was placed and how it was analyzed. The TRIAC plan should help me solve this problem. A quote, followed by analysis would clear up any confusion in the quote and strengthen my argument. My rough f=draft was also missing a title and works cited page. I need to be sure to make a correct works cited page and come up with a clever, interesting title for my essay. My biggest challenge for revision is finding relevant quotes. I always find it difficult to find relevant pieces of information from other authors. The quote needs to fit seamlessly into my conversation and sometimes the way it is worded in its source is odd and doesn’t fit. Finding the right quotes is usually a challenge for me. If a challenge comes up that is too difficult for me to solve on my own, I will first send a message to my peers asking for their advice. If I can’t get a sufficient answer from them I will go to other members of the class, and finally, ask for help from the professor.
