A wealth of constant information can be seen as detrimental yet helpful to young minds. There must be a balance in order for any benefit to be reaped. If there is too much, the brain becomes overwhelmed and won’t function as well.
Intro: Introduce the idea of balance in distraction. Include how technology has become part of our world. It’s now included in all of our everyday processes.
1st Paragraph should begin to introduce how the brain is still a developing organ in young adults. Introduce question of how technology impacts it?Harmful?Helpful?
Following paragraphs should each focus on a different aspect. The information we receive, how this impacts us socially, and how it affects us physically. Do we receive too much? Will we become less social? Does technology actually harm our minds in their ability to obtain information?
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